I think that for the most part your experiment worked. You may have been a
bit too heavy handed with complaints about the, "airy headed girl" thoughts
and I think you probably should have put in perhaps just a little bit more
about what she thinks after learning the truth. Even if its just she doenst
yet know what to think.
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