Finally finished reading this--sorry it took so long to get back to it.
Not a bad way to end a pretty good fic. The only real criticism I have is
the ongoing argument about your style choice for technique names. I *still*
feel that the names of techniques really should be left in Japanese rather
than boiling out long, cumbersome strings of English translations.
However, I know this is a losing battle, so I'd just like to say that if you
MUST bleat out attack names in English, do so in the less cumbersome manner
used by the anime dub. For example, instead of "Shadow Replication
Technique" use "Shadow Clone Jutsu".
Loved Tsunade's "resurrection" jutsu, BTW. Nice touch. :)
Anyway, thanks for sticking through to the end and giving us what is without
question one of the finest Naruto fics around.
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