On 10/06/11 23:31, Pete Batard wrote:

regarding the man page patch:
-can be any of
+can be one of
how is that better (non-native speaker here...)?

Non native speaker either, but I think (feel) "any of" is better applied to very short lists, whereas "one of" is better applied to long ones, and our list has grown long. As the matter above, just a matter of individual perception.


As someone who is a native English speaker I would say that "one of <list>" implies you can select one item from <list> (only one) and "any of <list>" implies you can select one or more option from <list>. I have had a brief look in 'man flashrom' and I would suggest removing "any of" in all places and "one of" in one place, they don't seem needed.

Best explained in a patch, so I have attached one.
Signed-off-by: Andrew Morgan <[email protected]>

I left “one of -h, -R, -L, -z, -E, -r, -w, -v or no operation.” because those options are mutually exclusive.

--

Andrew.

Index: flashrom.8
===================================================================
--- flashrom.8	(revision 1333)
+++ flashrom.8	(working copy)
@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@
 .B "flashrom \-p dummy:bus=[type[+type[+type]]]"
 syntax where
 .B type
-can be any of
+can be
 .BR parallel ", " lpc ", " fwh ", " spi
 in any order. If you specify bus without type, all buses will be disabled.
 If you do not specify bus, all buses will be enabled.
@@ -361,12 +361,12 @@
 .sp
 syntax where
 .B model
-can be one of
+can be
 .BR 2232H ", " 4232H ", " jtagkey ", " openmoko ", " arm-usb-tiny ", " \
 arm-usb-tiny-h ", " arm-usb-ocd " or " arm-usb-ocd-h
 and
 .B interface
-can be any of
+can be
 .BR A ", or " B .
 The default model is
 .B 4232H
@@ -401,7 +401,7 @@
 .sp
 where
 .B frequency
-can be any of
+can be
 .BR 30k ", " 125k ", " 250k ", " 1M ", " 2M ", " 2.6M ", " 4M ", " 8M
 (in Hz). The default is the maximum frequency of 8 MHz.
 .TP
@@ -417,7 +417,7 @@
 .sp
 where
 .B value
-can be any of
+can be
 .BR 0V ", " 1.8V ", " 2.5V ", " 3.5V
 or the equivalent in mV.
 .TP
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