Hi Martin and Stuart,

I checked incorrect or dead links in the current version of Manual 
(except Appendix).

Following are the results and my suggestions.

* 3.3 Installing documentation

http://www.adobe.com/products/acrobat/
  --> Alive, but incorrect. Please change to http://get.adobe.com/reader/
  Also it would be better to correct the description:
  Adobe's Acrobat Reader, available from
  --> Adobe Reader, available from

* 8.10 The autopilot

https://www3.bendixking.com/servlet/com.honeywell.aes.utility.PDFDownLoadServlet?FileName=/TechPubs/repository/006-18034-0000_2.pdf
  --> Connection has timed out. Please delete this link.

* 8.13.1 How to land the Cherokee Warrior II

http://www.alioth.net/flying/pa28-161/index.html
--> Connection has timed out. Please delete this link.

* 10.5 Epilogue

http://worldaerodata.com
--> Very unfortunately, server not found. Please delete this link.
     cf. http://www.flightgear.org/forums/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=19067

http://www.faa.gov/library/manuals/aviation/instrument_flying_handbook
--> http://www.faa.gov/library/manuals/aviation/media/FAA-H-8083-15B.pdf
     or
     http://www.faa.gov/library/manuals/aviation/
  Also it would be better to correct the description:
  It can be downloaded as multiple PDF files.
  --> It can be downloaded as a PDF file.


Moreover, I noticed that "Part IV Appendices" includes no sections, and 
"Part V Annexes" includes Appendix A (Missed approach) and B (Landing).

In the commit log of getstart.tex:
http://mapserver.flightgear.org/git/gitweb.pl?p=getstart;a=commitdiff;h=799005980b3825dfc731e1528473630b9cd906d5

  iflanguage{english}{
  part{Annexes}
  {}

might should be

  iflanguage{french}{
  part{Annexes}
  {}

but I'm not sure if Annexes is French word...

Cheers,
Toshi

------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Free Next-Gen Firewall Hardware Offer
Buy your Sophos next-gen firewall before the end March 2013 
and get the hardware for free! Learn more.
http://p.sf.net/sfu/sophos-d2d-feb
_______________________________________________
Flightgear-devel mailing list
Flightgear-devel@lists.sourceforge.net
https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/flightgear-devel

Reply via email to