2009/3/11 Ryan Kaldari <kald...@gmail.com>:
>> "either by, at your choice, including"
>
> "at your choice" is unnecessarily verbose. The sentence has the same
> meaning without the extra clause.

Removed it from the draft.
-- 
Erik Möller
Deputy Director, Wikimedia Foundation

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