Tammy, I would only modify John's version to the following:
The information is displayed across five tabs (left to right): Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details. In my earlier life as a newspaper editor (no, I'm not as ancient as some people think), placing left to right in parentheses, was essentially the AP style for photo captions. Tom Beiswenger Project Manager, Manager IB Technical Documentation Emhart Glass Inc. 74 Kahler Road North • Horseheads NY 14845 • USA Telephone 1 607 735 2551 • Mobile +1 607 769 4779 Fax +1 607 735 2601 tom.beiswen...@emhartglass.com www.bucheremhartglass.com www.bucherindustries.com Privacy Policy: www.bucheremhartglass.com/privacy -----"Framers" <framers-bounces+tom.beiswenger=emhartglass....@lists.frameusers.com> wrote: ----- To: "'An email list for people using Adobe FrameMaker software.'" <framers@lists.frameusers.com> From: Sent by: "Framers" Date: 01/07/2019 01:48PM Subject: Re: [Framers] OT: Punctuation question You would think so, but in another part of the manual, there is a plot that distinctly shows a legend, and instead of only referring to the legend (as in see legend for plot details), I was required to literally explain the legend verbatim, as in Forward is highlighted in blue, Reverse is highlighted in red, non-directional is highlighted in black, etc. I am too old for this head-banging - I will pick my battles. . . Tammy Van Boening Tammy dot vanboening at spectrumwritingllc dot com https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__www.spectrumwritingllc.com&d=DwICAg&c=euGZstcaTDllvimEN8b7jXrwqOf-v5A_CdpgnVfiiMM&r=zzmJd9V-AOY-pLCA-v8cPy_mRSvZCZwNZBdUabWmOfQ&m=cHU-aI3dwaJK3XC9gkBr5qN2Dhf9GxYToPKFBOD38Og&s=-E8UPSzd9alV1W5rcW86pt7oLWBJrTgRdIpjJFT103U&e= -----Original Message----- From: Framers <framers-bounces+tammyvb=spectrumwritingllc....@lists.frameusers.com> On Behalf Of John Sgammato Sent: Monday, January 7, 2019 11:45 AM To: An email list for people using Adobe FrameMaker software. <framers@lists.frameusers.com> Subject: Re: [Framers] OT: Punctuation question I would just say: The information is displayed across five tabs: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details. I would assume an English-language reader would assume left to right. On Mon, Jan 7, 2019 at 1:34 PM <tamm...@spectrumwritingllc.com> wrote: > Consider the following three sentences: > > > > 1.) The information is displayed across five tabs, which, from left to > right, are the following: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details. > > 2.) The information is displayed across five tabs, which from left to > right, are the following: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details. > > 3.) The information is displayed across five tabs, which from left to > right are the following: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details. > > > > Three different editors. Three different copy edits. I have my > 'druthers, but I thought I would reach out to all the writers on this > list and get a majority opinion. And yes, I am saying opinion, because > I know that there is an absolute right and wrong, but I need to be > neutral and non-judgmental when supplying my feedback and making the > correction. 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