On Jun 08 2010 20:51, Gary Kline wrote: <snip> > > He added, ``There are some news groups on the Net that have little to do > with computers, per se. There are groups that argue about politics, > religion, science, art, you name it. I don't waste my time with those.'' > <snip>
Nice ploy to generate interest in your novel. I'd change "There are some groups on the Net that have little" to "Some groups on the Net have little". Likewise, "There are groups that argue" to "Some groups argue", or perhaps "You can find groups that argue". I try to avoid the passive "There are" whenever possible. -- Sterling (Chip) Camden | camdensoftware.com | chipstips.com | chipsquips.com _______________________________________________ freebsd-questions@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-questions To unsubscribe, send any mail to "freebsd-questions-unsubscr...@freebsd.org"
