<URL: http://bugs.freeciv.org/Ticket/Display.html?id=40694 >
Some minor nation cleanup as reported by Sini Ruohomaa on
freeciv-i18n.
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ニート国家を今でも待っている。
data/nation/armenian.ruleset | 2 +-
data/nation/illyrian.ruleset | 14 +++++++-------
data/nation/malian.ruleset | 4 ++--
data/nation/mayan.ruleset | 4 ++--
data/nation/soviet.ruleset | 9 +++++----
data/nation/westphalian.ruleset | 2 +-
6 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)
diff --git a/data/nation/armenian.ruleset b/data/nation/armenian.ruleset
index caba625..a74e7e7 100644
--- a/data/nation/armenian.ruleset
+++ b/data/nation/armenian.ruleset
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ plural=_("?plural:Armenians")
groups="Ancient", "Modern", "European"
legend=_("According to legend, the Armenian people are the descendants of\
Haik - the great-great-grandson of Noah. The modern Republic of Armenia\
- gained independence from Soviet in 1991 AD")
+ gained independence from the USSR in 1991.")
leader=
"Armenak",
"Ishpuinis",
diff --git a/data/nation/illyrian.ruleset b/data/nation/illyrian.ruleset
index 42fd664..b25486a 100644
--- a/data/nation/illyrian.ruleset
+++ b/data/nation/illyrian.ruleset
@@ -4,13 +4,13 @@ name=_("Illyrian")
plural=_("?plural:Illyrians")
groups="Ancient", "European"
legend=_("Illyrians were Indo-European tribes who appeared in the\
- western part of the Balkan Peninsula before 1000 BC,\
- including the Dalmatians to the north,\
- Corcyra island and Ambracia bay in prehistoric Epirus to the south,\
- mixing with Thracians in Dardania to the east,\
- and settling Messapia across the Adriatic Sea.\
- Illyrian kingdoms were independent for centuries,\
- until conquered by the Roman Republic.")
+ western part of the Balkan Peninsula before 1000 BC, \
+ including Dalmatia to the north, and\
+ Corcyra island and Ambracia bay in prehistoric Epirus to the south.\
+ They mixed with Thracians in Dardania to the east,\
+ and settled Messapia across the Adriatic Sea.\
+ Illyrian kingdoms were independent for centuries,\
+ until conquered by the Roman Republic.")
; listed from legendary founder, until conquered by romans.
; researching turns out to be annoyingly difficult due to
diff --git a/data/nation/malian.ruleset b/data/nation/malian.ruleset
index 1c115d2..58dfe40 100644
--- a/data/nation/malian.ruleset
+++ b/data/nation/malian.ruleset
@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@ groups="Modern", "Medieval", "African"
legend=_("Sub-Saharan Africa has been a cultural and ethnical melting pot\
for millennia. In medieval times, the region was home to a succession of\
empires called the Sahelian kingdoms. Of these, the Islamic Mali empire\
- with it's capital in Timbuktu was the most influential. This empire\
- reigned from the 14th to the 17th century and was famed for it's wealth and\
+ with its capital in Timbuktu was the most influential. This empire\
+ reigned from the 14th to the 17th century and was famed for its wealth and\
benevolent kings. The modern Republic of Mali derives its name from this\
empire.")
leader=
diff --git a/data/nation/mayan.ruleset b/data/nation/mayan.ruleset
index 046a78d..c163b6c 100644
--- a/data/nation/mayan.ruleset
+++ b/data/nation/mayan.ruleset
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
name=_("Mayan")
plural=_("?plural:Mayas")
groups="Ancient", "Medieval", "American"
-legend=_("The Mayans were a Mesoamerican civilization. Famous for building\
- great pyramids and palaces in the jungle.")
+legend=_("The Mayans were a Mesoamerican civilization. They are\
+ famous for building great pyramids and palaces in the jungle.")
leader=
"K'uk B'alam",
"Zac-Kuk",
diff --git a/data/nation/soviet.ruleset b/data/nation/soviet.ruleset
index 059463b..24244e2 100644
--- a/data/nation/soviet.ruleset
+++ b/data/nation/soviet.ruleset
@@ -3,12 +3,13 @@
name=_("Soviet")
plural=_("?plural:Soviets")
groups="European", "Asian"
-legend=_("Soviet Union's history starts in November 1917,\
+legend=_("The history of the Soviet Union starts in November 1917,\
when under Lenin's leadership a Bolshevik revolution occurred.\
On December 31 1922, four Soviet republics integrated into one\
- country. Soviet Union became one of most powerful states in\
- the 20th century. But by the end of 1991 due to many social\
- shocks it disintegrated into fifteen independent countries")
+ country. The Soviet Union became one of most powerful states in\
+ the 20th century, but by the end of 1991 it had disintegrated\
+ into fifteen independent countries due to social and economic\
+ problems.")
leader=
"Vladimir Lenin",
"Iosif Stalin",
diff --git a/data/nation/westphalian.ruleset b/data/nation/westphalian.ruleset
index 40539c6..91a55e1 100644
--- a/data/nation/westphalian.ruleset
+++ b/data/nation/westphalian.ruleset
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ name=_("Westphalian")
plural=_("?plural:Westphalians")
groups="Medieval", "European"
legend=_("Westphalia, before becoming a Prussian province, was the western\
- region the duchy of Saxony. Present-day it consists of the Northern part of\
+ region of the duchy of Saxony. Today it makes up the northern part of\
the largest German federal state, North Rhine-Westphalia.")
leader =
"Widukind",
data/nation/armenian.ruleset | 2 +-
data/nation/illyrian.ruleset | 14 +++++++-------
data/nation/mayan.ruleset | 4 ++--
data/nation/soviet.ruleset | 9 +++++----
4 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
diff --git a/data/nation/armenian.ruleset b/data/nation/armenian.ruleset
index caba625..a74e7e7 100644
--- a/data/nation/armenian.ruleset
+++ b/data/nation/armenian.ruleset
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ plural=_("?plural:Armenians")
groups="Ancient", "Modern", "European"
legend=_("According to legend, the Armenian people are the descendants of\
Haik - the great-great-grandson of Noah. The modern Republic of Armenia\
- gained independence from Soviet in 1991 AD")
+ gained independence from the USSR in 1991.")
leader=
"Armenak",
"Ishpuinis",
diff --git a/data/nation/illyrian.ruleset b/data/nation/illyrian.ruleset
index d9b002a..7bbe2c6 100644
--- a/data/nation/illyrian.ruleset
+++ b/data/nation/illyrian.ruleset
@@ -4,13 +4,13 @@ name=_("Illyrian")
plural=_("?plural:Illyrians")
groups="Ancient", "European"
legend=_("Illyrians were Indo-European tribes who appeared in the\
- western part of the Balkan Peninsula before 1000 BC,\
- including the Dalmatians to the north,\
- Corcyra island and Ambracia bay in prehistoric Epirus to the south,\
- mixing with Thracians in Dardania to the east,\
- and settling Messapia across the Adriatic Sea.\
- Illyrian kingdoms were independent for centuries,\
- until conquered by the Roman Republic.")
+ western part of the Balkan Peninsula before 1000 BC, \
+ including Dalmatia to the north, and\
+ Corcyra island and Ambracia bay in prehistoric Epirus to the south.\
+ They mixed with Thracians in Dardania to the east,\
+ and settled Messapia across the Adriatic Sea.\
+ Illyrian kingdoms were independent for centuries,\
+ until conquered by the Roman Republic.")
; listed from legendary founder, until conquered by romans.
; researching turns out to be annoyingly difficult due to
diff --git a/data/nation/mayan.ruleset b/data/nation/mayan.ruleset
index c3cc032..3234972 100644
--- a/data/nation/mayan.ruleset
+++ b/data/nation/mayan.ruleset
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
name=_("Mayan")
plural=_("?plural:Mayas")
groups="Ancient", "Medieval", "American"
-legend=_("The Mayans were a Mesoamerican civilization. Famous for building\
- great pyramids and palaces in the jungle.")
+legend=_("The Mayans were a Mesoamerican civilization. They are\
+ famous for building great pyramids and palaces in the jungle.")
leader=
"K'uk B'alam",
"Zac-Kuk",
diff --git a/data/nation/soviet.ruleset b/data/nation/soviet.ruleset
index 06025b3..7a42029 100644
--- a/data/nation/soviet.ruleset
+++ b/data/nation/soviet.ruleset
@@ -3,12 +3,13 @@
name=_("Soviet")
plural=_("?plural:Soviets")
groups="European", "Asian"
-legend=_("Soviet Union's history starts in November 1917,\
+legend=_("The history of the Soviet Union starts in November 1917,\
when under Lenin's leadership a Bolshevik revolution occurred.\
On December 31 1922, four Soviet republics integrated into one\
- country. Soviet Union became one of most powerful states in\
- the 20th century. But by the end of 1991 due to many social\
- shocks it disintegrated into fifteen independent countries")
+ country. The Soviet Union became one of most powerful states in\
+ the 20th century, but by the end of 1991 it had disintegrated\
+ into fifteen independent countries due to social and economic\
+ problems.")
leader=
"Vladimir Lenin",
"Iosif Stalin",
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