On Tue, May 12, 2009 at 11:04:36AM +1000, Russell Dickenson 
<[email protected]> wrote:
> "overview" should perhaps be replaced with "overhaul" or "review".
> "Overhaul" might be best, since an overhaul involves changes while a
> review doesn't.  However "overhaul" suggests that there was something
> wrong with the existing documentation and, aside from a few
> grammatical errors, there was nothing wrong with it.  I'm just being
> pedantic so please feel free to ignore this.

Replaced with 'review'.

> > +            Please refer to the Frugalware <a 
> > href="http://ftp.frugalware.org/pub/frugalware/frugalware-testing/ChangeLog.txt";>Anacreon
> >  ChangeLog</a> for more information.<br />
> 
> Should this be "Anacreon ChangeLog" or "Getorin Changelog"?

Right, fixed.

And please reply to -devel next time, I know first time it sounds weird
but I checked the -devel mails before I removed the hidden flag, but I
did not thought about checking -git as well. ;)

Thanks.

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