Re: [Frugalware-git] homepage-ng: 1.1pre1 announce draft

[Russell Dickenson]

On Tue, May 12, 2009 at 9:48 AM, Miklos Vajna <vmik...@frugalware.org> wrote:
> Git-Url: 
> http://git.frugalware.org/gitweb/gitweb.cgi?p=homepage-ng.git;a=commitdiff;h=be506627058a3b5692626d1d25b214a96b98fbf3
>
> commit be506627058a3b5692626d1d25b214a96b98fbf3
> Author: Miklos Vajna <vmik...@frugalware.org>
> Date:   Tue May 12 01:48:45 2009 +0200
>
> 1.1pre1 announce draft
>
> diff --git a/frugalware/xml/news.xml b/frugalware/xml/news.xml
> index f7a071a..879ea95 100644
> --- a/frugalware/xml/news.xml
> +++ b/frugalware/xml/news.xml
> @@ -22,6 +22,38 @@ Example: Mon, 07 Aug 2006 12:34:56 -0600 -->
>
> <news>
> <post>
> +        <id>134</id>
> +        <title>Frugalware 1.1pre1 (Getorin) released</title>
> +        <date>FIXME</date>
> +        <author>Miklos Vajna</author>
> +        <hidden>1</hidden>
> +        <content><![CDATA[
> +            The Frugalware Developer Team is pleased to <a 
> href="/news/134">announce</a> the immediate availability of Frugalware 
> 1.1pre1, the first technical preview of the upcoming 1.1 stable release.<br />
> +            A short and incomplete list of changes since 1.0:<br />
> +            <ul>
> +                <li>Improvements:
> +                                                                       <ul>
> +                                                                             
>   <li>The installer is built with debug support by default for the 
> prereleases to help bugreporters.</li>
> +                                                                             
>   <li>Major overview in the documention: numerous grammatical fixes and 
> various extensions.</li>

"overview" should perhaps be replaced with "overhaul" or "review".
"Overhaul" might be best, since an overhaul involves changes while a
review doesn't.  However "overhaul" suggests that there was something
wrong with the existing documentation and, aside from a few
grammatical errors, there was nothing wrong with it.  I'm just being
pedantic so please feel free to ignore this.


> +                                                                       </ul>
> +                </li>
> +                <li>Package updates:
> +                    <ul>
> +                        <li>Linux kernel 2.6.29.2 + fixes</li>
> +                        <li>GNOME 2.26</li>
> +                        <li>Mono 2.4</li>
> +                        <li>More than 800 other package updates</li>
> +                        <li>More than 70 new packages</li>
> +                    </ul>
> +                </li>
> +            </ul>
> +            Please refer to the Frugalware <a 
> href="http://ftp.frugalware.org/pub/frugalware/frugalware-testing/ChangeLog.txt";>Anacreon
>  ChangeLog</a> for more information.<br />

Should this be "Anacreon ChangeLog" or "Getorin Changelog"?


May you always be Frugal,

Russell Dickenson (AKA phayz)
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