Hi Thomas,
Well I would say that your descriptions are a fine bit of creative writing with
all of the great descriptions etc. Like I said, I am not at all good at that
kind of writing.
As far as the foreplay goes, you have to remember that this is Dungeon Master
with a Sado Masochistic theme not a romance novel. All of the times that I
have been with a professional Dominatrix and other people into Sado Masochism
there was no romance, it was all about the acts of Sado Masochism. Really not
much build up either. Get naked and be tied up or do as you are told and enjoy
the whip, nipple clamps, hot wax, electricity, physical and mental domination
etc etc.
BFN
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Hi Jim,
No problem. That I can do. It may take me a few days to write up some
examples of better game pros but it really doesn't require much
creative writing. It just needs more detail in terms of sight,
sounds, smells, and so on. Of course, the more creative a person is in
describing something the more appealing it will be.
For example, since I'll need a clean description for this on list I'll
attempt to describe the DC super hero Wonder Woman with a bit of pros
to make it hopefully interesting for a gamer playing that type of
game.
Princess Diana is an ageless beauty with a tall lean body, and
incredibly stunning looks. Long black tresses frames a pretty face
with high set cheekbones, sparkling blue eyes, and sensuous red lips.
She is dressed in a red spandex top, blue and white spandex star
spangled shorts, and a pair of red and white knee high boots. A Blue
and white star spangled cape is draped casually around her body, and a
golden magic lasso is tied around her waist and is affixed to her
yellow utility belt. Atop her head is a golden diadem with a read ruby
set in the middle befitting her station as an Amazon princess. Her
wrists are bound in two silver magic bracelets that give her
extraordinary powers and abilities beyond that of mortal men and
women.
Basically, the more details one can give the better. Of course, a
person doesn't want to over do it either. However, the idea being we
want to set the mood, give enough detail that the world seems real to
the player, and since this game involves sex we want to attempt to
install some sort of longing for the potential lovers. That may
require some extra steps to see the woman naked. She might be dressed
in a night gown or some other skimpy clothing that can be more erotic
than walking in on a chick totally nude, and the first objective would
be to get her undressed.
For example, if an adult game involved Wonder Woman I'd want to start
off with her in her costume. All of her personal attributes would b
hidden from view and I'd have to warm her up by kissingher, touching
her intimately, spanking her, whatever and one by one she'll give up
her clothing until she is naked. Then I could proceed to do more
intimate things with her. Perhaps tie her to the bed with her golden
lasso and do what I wanted with her. :D
The point being is that the act of undressing the female NPC is erotic
in of itself, and helps build excitement. The way Dungeon Master is
right now all I have to do is find a certain item and use it on the
right girl before having sex with her. There is little in the way of
foreplay or build up which I think would make the game more exciting.
HTH
Jim
Whip me, beat me, make me write bad software.
j...@kitchensinc.net
http://www.kitchensinc.net
(440) 286-6920
Chardon Ohio USA
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