On 31 January 2013 12:59, Guido Trotter <[email protected]> wrote:
> Interdiff:
> diff --git a/NEWS b/NEWS
> index fdd8683..9e3b1fc 100644
> --- a/NEWS
> +++ b/NEWS
> @@ -56,16 +56,21 @@ Version 2.7.0 beta1
>    which case the output is in ``doc/man-html``. The configure-time
>    option is ``--enable-manpages-in-doc``. Sphinx 1.0 or higher is
>    required.
> -- A new htool called ``hroller`` is included. As of this version it
> -  helps scheduling parallel shutdown of nodes on clusters where all
> -  instances are shut down, but without ever rebooting both primary and
> -  secondary node for an instance at the same time.
> +- A new htool called ``hroller`` helps scheduling parallel shutdown of
> +  nodes on clusters where all instances are shut down, but without ever
> +  rebooting both primary and secondary node for an instance at the same
> +  time.
>  - When enabled, queries not needing locks or RPC access to the node are
>    now performed by the confd daemon, making them independent from jobs,
>    and thus faster to execute.
> -- KVM has been updated with many new hypervisor parameters, including a
> -  generic one for passing arbitrary command line values. See a complete
> -  list in :manpage:`gnt-instance(8)`
> +- The KVM hypervisor has been updated with many new hypervisor
> +  parameters, including a generic one for passing arbitrary command line
> +  values. See a complete list in :manpage:`gnt-instance(8)`

Missing dot at the end.

> +- A new tool, called ``mon-collector``, is the stand-alone executor of
> +  the data collectors for a monitoring system. As of this version, it
> +  just includes the DRBD data collector, that can be executed calling

s/calling/by calling/

> +  ``mon-collector`` using the ``drbd`` parameter. See
> +  :manpage:`mon-collector(7)`

Missing dot at the end.


Also, please add this point about partitioned:

- New ``exclusive-storage`` node parameter added. When it's set to true,
  physical disks are assigned in an exclusive fashion to instances, as
  documented in :doc:`Partitioned Ganeti <design-partitioned>`.
  Currently, only instances using the ``plain`` disk template are
  supported.

Then LGTM, thanks!

Bernardo

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