On Fri, Jan 3, 2014 at 9:42 AM, Jose A. Lopes <[email protected]> wrote:
> Add manpage for 'gnt-instance' detailing the 'user_shutdown' parameter
> and how it related to the 'acpi' parameter.
>

I guess you meant "Modify the manpage" instead of "add"?

> Signed-off-by: Jose A. Lopes <[email protected]>
> ---
>  man/gnt-instance.rst | 16 ++++++++++++++++
>  1 file changed, 16 insertions(+)
>
> diff --git a/man/gnt-instance.rst b/man/gnt-instance.rst
> index b90f68d..3f760b9 100644
> --- a/man/gnt-instance.rst
> +++ b/man/gnt-instance.rst
> @@ -471,6 +471,9 @@ acpi
>      A boolean option that specifies if the hypervisor should enable
>      ACPI support for this instance. By default, ACPI is disabled.
>
> +    ACPI should be enabled for user shutdown detection.  See
> +    ``user_shutdown``.
> +
>  pae
>      Valid for the Xen HVM and KVM hypervisors.
>
> @@ -615,6 +618,19 @@ use\_chroot
>
>      It is set to ``false`` by default.
>
> +user\_shutdown
> +    Valid for the KVM hypervisor.
> +
> +    This boolean option determines whether the KVM instance suports user

s/suports/supports.

But, actually, the sentence is a bit unclear to me. I'd write instead:
"This boolean option determines whether shutdown detection is enabled
for this KVM instance."

> +    shutdown detection.  This option does not necessarily require ACPI
> +    enabled, but ACPI must be enabled for users to poweroff their KVM
> +    instances.
> +
> +    If it is set to ``true``, the user can shutdown this KVM instance
> +    and its status is reported as ``USER_down``.

s/is reported as ``USER_down``/will be reported as ``USER_down``
instead of ``ERROR_down``/

> +
> +    It is set to ``false`` by default.
> +
>  migration\_downtime
>      Valid for the KVM hypervisor.
>
> --
> 1.8.5.1
>

Thanks,
Michele

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