On Thu, Sep 03, 2015 at 03:52:19PM +0200, Hrvoje Ribicic wrote:
> LGTM with nits

Thanks. FYI, this results in the followin interdiff

commit d6a03505864fc788c4b1e6cb1b685efae1c33faa
Author: Klaus Aehlig <[email protected]>
Date:   Thu Sep 3 15:57:18 2015 +0200

    Interdiff 2

diff --git a/doc/design-memory-over-commitment.rst 
b/doc/design-memory-over-commitment.rst
index 5489a9a..d32479a 100644
--- a/doc/design-memory-over-commitment.rst
+++ b/doc/design-memory-over-commitment.rst
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ Changes to the memory policy
 The memory policy will be changed in that we assume that one byte
 of physical node memory can hold ``memory-ratio`` bytes of instance
 memory, but still only one byte of Ganeti memory. Of course, in practise
-this has to be backed by swap space; it is the administrator responsibility
+this has to be backed by swap space; it is the administrator's responsibility
 to ensure that each node has swap of at
 least ``(memory-ratio - 1.0) * (memory_total - memory_dom0)``. Ganeti
 will warn if the amount of swap space is not big enough.
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ The new memory policy will be as follows.
 
 - The definition of N+1 redundancy (including
   :doc:`design-shared-storage-redundancy`) is kept literally as is.
-  Note, however, that the meaning does change, as definition depends
+  Note, however, that the meaning does change, as the definition depends
   on the notion of allowed moves, which is changed by this proposal.
 
 
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ memory). The weighting for this metric component will have 
to be
 determined by experimentation and will depend on the memory ratio;
 for a memory ratio of ``1.0`` the weight will be ``0.0``, as memory
 need not be taken into account if no over-commitment is in place.
-As a starting point for experimenation we will use weight ``0.0``
+As a starting point for experimentation we will use weight ``0.0``
 if the memory ratio is ``1.0`` and weight ``1.0`` if it is bigger
 than ``1.0``.

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