diff --git a/NEWS b/NEWS
index ed009a0..f6766d2 100644
--- a/NEWS
+++ b/NEWS
@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@ Version 2.17.0 alpha1
 Incompatible/important changes
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

-- The IAllocator protocol has been extended by a new ``hv-state``
parameter.
+- The IAllocator protocol has been extended by a new ``hv_state``
parameter.
   This new parameter is used to estimate the amount of memory utilized by
-  the node instead of ``reserved_mem`` on hypervisors other than
``xen-pvm``
+  the node. It replaces ``reserved_mem`` on hypervisors other than
``xen-pvm``
   and ``xen-hvm`` because ``reserved_mem`` was reported incorrectly on
them.
-  As far as this ``hv_state`` parameter is not presented in iallocator
input,
+  If this ``hv_state`` parameter is not presented in an iallocator input,
the
   old ``reserved_mem`` will be used.

On Tue, Oct 27, 2015 at 10:28 AM Lisa Velden <[email protected]> wrote:

> The second sentence still doesn't make much sense to me. Can we split that
> into two sentences?
>
> On Tue, Oct 27, 2015 at 9:09 AM 'Klaus Aehlig' via ganeti-devel <
> [email protected]> wrote:
>
>> On Mon, Oct 26, 2015 at 10:56:00PM +0300, My Name wrote:
>> > Correct several mistakes in the NEWS file.
>> >
>> > Signed-off-by: Oleg Ponomarev <[email protected]>
>> > ---
>> >  NEWS | 9 +++------
>> >  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
>>
>> LGTM
>>
>> --
>> Klaus Aehlig
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