On Fri, 6 May 2011, Jonathan Wakely wrote:
> 2011-05-06  Jonathan Wakely  <jwakely....@gmail.com>
> 
>         * doc/invoke.texi (-fuse-linker-plugin): Improve grammar.
> 
> I was going to commit a smaller version of this patch as obvious (just
> the second of the three hunks in the patch) but I spotted a few other
> improvements that could be made. I think my changes preserve the
> intended meaning, but improve the English slightly and (I hope)
> clarify it.

This looks good, thank you!  (Some of the lines touched seem a bit
long? Perhaps wrap them?)

> Would removing "do" from "and shared libraries that do use hidden
> visibility" be a further improvement?

That I better leave to the native speakers here. :-)

Gerald

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