Re: [PATCH][wwwdocs] Improve grammar for AVR changes in GCC 14

[Georg-Johann Lay]

Am 22.04.24 um 12:04 schrieb Jonathan Wakely:

OK for wwwdocs?

For me it's ok (I am not a native speaker though,
which is the reason the typos are there to begin with).

Johann

  htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html | 16 ++++++++--------
  1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html b/htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html
index 9509487c..21d33db8 100644
--- a/htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html
+++ b/htdocs/gcc-14/changes.html
@@ -696,13 +696,13 @@ a work-in-progress.</p>
  <h3 id="avr">AVR</h3>
  <ul>
    <li>On AVR64* and AVR128* devices, read-only data is now located in program
-    memory per default and no more in RAM.
+    memory per default and no longer in RAM.
      <ul>
        <li>Only a 32&nbsp;KiB block of program memory can be used to store
        and access .rodata in that way. Which block is used can be selected
-       by defining symbol <code>__flmap</code>.
+       by defining the symbol <code>__flmap</code>.
        As an alternative, the byte address of the block can be specified
-       by symbol <code>__RODATA_FLASH_START__</code> which takes
+       by the symbol <code>__RODATA_FLASH_START__</code> which takes
        precedence over <code>__flmap</code>.
        For example, linking with
        <code>-Wl,--defsym,__RODATA_FLASH_START__=32k</code>
@@ -715,9 +715,9 @@ a work-in-progress.</p>
        href="https://github.com/avrdudes/avr-libc/issues/931";>#931</a>
        can be used. The latter initializes <code>NVMCTRL_CTRLB.FLMAP</code>
        in the startup code and according to the value
-       of&nbsp;<code>__flmap</code> resp.
+       of&nbsp;<code>__flmap</code> or
        <code>__RODATA_FLASH_START__</code>.</li>
-      <li>When AVR-LibC with&nbsp;#931 is used, then defining symbol
+      <li>When AVR-LibC with&nbsp;#931 is used, then defining the symbol
        <code>__flmap_lock</code> to a non-zero value will set bit
        <code>NVMCTRL_CTRLB.FLMAPLOCK</code>. This will protect
        <code>NVMCTRL_CTRLB.FLMAP</code> from any further changes &mdash;
@@ -726,7 +726,7 @@ a work-in-progress.</p>
        can be used:<pre>
  __asm (".global __flmap_lock"  "\n\t"
         "__flmap_lock = 1");</pre></li>
-      <li>When you do not want the code from&nbsp;#931, then define global
+      <li>When you do not want the code from&nbsp;#931, then define a global
        symbol <code>__do_flmap_init</code> and the linker will not pull in
        that code from <code>lib<var>mcu</var>.a</code> any more.</li>
        <li>In order to return to the old placement of read-only data in RAM,
@@ -736,7 +736,7 @@ __asm (".global __flmap_lock"  "\n\t"
          functionality.</b>
        </li>
        <li>Read-only data is located in output section <code>.rodata</code>,
-       wheras it is part of <code>.text</code> when located in RAM.</li>
+       whereas it is part of <code>.text</code> when located in RAM.</li>
        <li>The feature is only available when the compiler is configured
        with a version of Binutils that implements
        <a href="https://sourceware.org/PR31124";>PR31124</a>, which is the
@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ __asm (".global __flmap_lock"  "\n\t"
    <li>
      On the Reduced Tiny devices,
      the meaning of register constraint&nbsp;<code>"w"</code> has been changed.
-    It containts now the registers R24&hellip;R31 like it is the case for all
+    It now constrains the registers R24&hellip;R31 as is the case for all
      the other devices.
    </li>
  </ul>