Summary: discuss, particularly adopt most of what Sam said. I am reading Sam's notes and I disagree with the first part of what he says, on flexibility. I spent some time with some pioneers of msec so I may be biased but there are only two flexibility mechanisms, applied repeatedly. Also the design is for a very constrained multicast environment: one-to-many with central registration. Therefore I don't believe his comments about flexibility or multicast (as a whole) apply here.
On the other hand, everything he says in the middle is powerful and blocks it in my mind. I don't believe he should have abstained, because I believe everything listed can be fixed. Why allow for multiple protocols instead of GSAKMP? First, perhaps the WG chairs have a good technical answer; and if they don't, that can be fixed rather directly. So it's just a significant discuss, with questions. Other medium-to-small nits: "registration provides a list of acceptable registration and deregistration policy and mechanisms that may be used to manage member-initiated joins and departures from a group. A NULL sequence indicates that the group does not support registration and deregistration of members. A member MUST be able to support at least one set of Registration mechanisms in order to join the group. When multiple mechanisms are present, a member MAY use any of the listed methods. The list is ordered in terms of Group Owner preference. A member MUST choose the highest listed mechanism that local policy supports." First, I assume that a NULL sequence contains nothing -- there isn't a sequence element that is an explicit null. If true, then when the list is null a member CANNOT support at least one of the mechanisms -- there aren't any. Prefix that sentence with "if the list is not null ...", avoid complaints later. Second, in the last sentence, change "highest" to something like "first listed". Again, avoid ambiguity. Next paragraph, re "rekey": same comment about "highest". I don't see anywhere where the group owner is indicated in signaling. How is it known? Say so explicitly. Finally, someone needs to examine the IANA considerations. Aha, I see Mr Cotton said something along those lines. Other smaller nits: "Also, the members may want to verify that the access control rules are adequate to protect the data that the member is submitting to the group." editorial: "a member may want". "tokenInfo provides information about the instance of the Policy Token (PT)." Add something like "see Section 3.1". This sentence as it is makes me wonder if that's all they are going to tell me. swb _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
