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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: Ready with nits Some comments/suggestions (including a required fix for 5.3 [b]): - 2.1 page 5: the 512 octets default maximum seems a bit too conservative? - 2.1.1 C page 6: request -> query (IMHO the document should use only the pair of terms query/response) - 2.9 page 14: check if SIG(0) is not now RSIG(0) (PS: as far as I know the RFC 2931 was not updated so it is still SIG(0)) - 3.1 pages 17 and 18: linklocal -> link-local (twice) - 4.1 page 19: I am not happy with "interpreted as an unsigned integer" as this involves an ambiguous byte order (I assume it is big endian but it is not specified). I strongly prefer the lexicographical order. - 4.2 page 20: same than the previous point. - 4.2 page 21: requests -> queries, and replies -> responses - 5 page 22: 802.11 -> IEEE 802.11 - 5.1 page 23: silently discarding them as rapidly as possible -> silently discarding them (I don't know a way to slowly discard them :-) - 5.2 page 23: link layer security -> link-layer security (the link-xxx style seems fine) - 5.2 page 23: local-link -> local link - 5.3 [a] page 24: same than 2.9 - 5.3 [b] page 24: IPsec ESP has two NULL algorithms, NULL encryption and NULL integrity/authentication (cf RFC 4305, the term transform comes from RFC 4306 but "algorithm" is better). I strongly suggest: null-transform -> NULL encryption algorithm. - 6 page 25: my dictionary has no "coincident", in particular in this position... (i.e., there is a possible wording/language problem) - 8.2 pages 26/27: many informative references are for 2002 I-Ds, perhaps this can become a problem? - Acks page 28: Van-Valkenburg -> van Valkenburg? (please check with him) - Open Issues page 30: should be marked as to be removed by the RFC editor. Regards [EMAIL PROTECTED] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
