Hi Pasi, Please see inline,
> -----Message d'origine----- > De : [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Envoyé : mercredi 30 mai 2007 11:50 > À : [email protected]; [EMAIL PROTECTED]; > [EMAIL PROTECTED]; [EMAIL PROTECTED]; LE ROUX Jean-Louis > RD-CORE-LAN > Objet : Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-te-node-cap-05 > > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team > (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, > please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call > comments you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-te-node-cap-05 > Reviewer: Pasi Eronen > Review Date: 30 May 2007 > IETF LC End Date: 06 June 2007 > IESG Telechat date: (not known yet) > > Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but > has nits that should be fixed before publication. > > Comments: > > 1) Section 8.2 "[IS-IS-CAP] defines a new code point registry > for sub-TLVs carried in the ISIS CAPABILITY TLV". The current > version of [IS-IS-CAP] does not seem to define any new > IANA-maintained registries. This may be an bug in [IS-IS-CAP]? You are right this is a "bug" in [IS-IS-CAP] that has been fixed by IANA. IANA has actually defined a registry for sub-TLVs of the CAPABILITY TLV. See sub-registry "Sub-TLVs for TLV 242" in http://www.iana.org/assignments/isis-tlv-codepoints So we will remove the sentence "[IS-IS-CAP] defines a new code point registry for sub-TLVs carried in the ISIS CAPABILITY TLV" and replace by "IANA has defined a registry for sub-TLVs of the IS-IS CAPABILITY TLV" > > 2) Section 8.3: the bit numbers in this section don't match > the bit numbers in Sections 4.1/4.2. OK, this will be fixed > > 3) As noted in the proto write-up, there's a normative > downref (RFC 3784). This downref was not called out in the > IETF last call message, and it's not listed in the downref >registry. OK, what shall we do to cover this point? Best Regards, JL > > Best regards, > Pasi > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
