I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-psamp-sample-tech-10.txt Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 2 Nov 2007 IESG Telechat date: 5 Nov 2007 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. Some nits: 1) the draft uses gratuitous upper-casing of many words, which tends to distract the reader. For example: "This document describes Sampling and Filtering techniques...", "...selection techniques in Metering Processes...", "...choice of Hash Function and Hash Domain.", etc. 2) Section 1: s/demand by measurement-based/demand of measurement-based/ 3) Section 5, second paragraph: s/First of all it/First of all, it/ 4) Section 6.2.2, second paragraph: about the middle of the paragraph, there appears to be a presentation error of some sort: the justification of the text is a bit off. Thanks. - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 2701 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9F-546, Lisle, Illinois 60532 (USA) Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED],bell-labs.com,acm.org} WWW: http://www.alcatel-lucent.com/bell-labs _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
