I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
draft-ietf-psamp-protocol-08.txt
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Summary: This draft is almost ready, but I have a couple of comments.
* I think section 3.1 should be removed and be replaced with a reference
to the IPFIX proto terminology section. Since it is copied and pasted in
here, it cannot pickup any changes to the IPFIX proto document (say in
AUTH48).
* Similarly, the terminology from psamp-sample-tech is copied over and
is out of sync with the psamp-sample-tech-10 draft.
* If conflicting terminology exists in IPFIX and PSAMP-TECH, it is not
clear which one takes precedence. This is probably worth stating.
* In Section 6.4.1 the IPFIX Template Record ascii art spans pages. Is
it possible to insert a page break before this so that it appears in one
page.
Cheers
Suresh
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