I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pim-lasthop-threats-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2008-05-19 IETF LC End Date: 2008-05-23 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Comments: mainly editorial comments, i.e., should be handled by the RFC Editor: - ToC and section 5 page 11: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - Introduction page 3: abbrevs should be introduced (including PIM as the abstract is not considered as a part of the document body). - section 2 page 3: signalling -> signaling - section 2.5 page 5: behaviour -> behavior - section 2.6 page 5: TTL -> time-to-live - section 4.2 page 8: the reference to GDOI is fine but as GDOI is old and there are many newer things. IMHO you should check with the msec WG chairs if they have something to add, or for instance you could announce this last call in the msec WG list... Regards [EMAIL PROTECTED] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
