I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-gr-description-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2009-01-15 IETF LC End Date: 2009-01-20 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: none Minor issues: there are 4 authors in 11 (Authors' Addresses) but 3 only in front (first page). I am afraid Snigdho Bardalai was forgotten during some edits... Nits/editorial comments: - 4 page 7: P2MP -> point to multi-point - 5.2.2 page 10: Path_State_Reomved -> Path_State_Removed - 6 page 13 figure 2: resoure -> resource and resouces -> resources - 7 page 15: travelling -> traveling - 11 page 17: CA 95134 -> CA 95134 Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
