I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-iana-rfc3330bis-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2009-04-03 IETF LC End Date: 2009-04-18 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: I have two concerns about the Abstract: - the first sentence "This document obsoletes RFC 3330." should be removed before the publication as an RFC - the last sentence has an explicit reference to RFC 5156, this could be considered as forbidden in an Abstract, I propose to change it into: ... are described in another document (RFC 5156). In authors' addresses: United States -> United States of America (there is an incredible amount of countries with a full name translating into united states in English :-). Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
