I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-pkix-3281update-04
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 10 April 2009
IETF LC End Date: 10 April 2009
IESG Telechat date: unknown 

Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues: 


Minor issues:

Section 4.2.8:
   this field SHOULD NOT be used by conforming CAs
I assume CA is Certificate Authority that issued the AC issuer's PKC,
but this acronym isn't expanded in the terminology section.


Nits/editorial comments:

Section 7.1:
   content type carried withing the ciphertext.
SHOULD BE:
   content type carried within the ciphertext.

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