At 3:00 PM -0400 5/19/09, McCann Peter-A001034 wrote:
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Document: draft-ietf-pkix-3281update-05
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 19 May 2009
IESG Telechat date: 21 May 2009
Summary: Ready, still 2 nits.
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
The acronym CA (Certificate Authority) should be spelled out
in the Terminology section.
Section 7.1, there is still a typo: s/withing/within
Peter,
I agree that acronyms should be expanded on first use, but the
acronym CA expands to certification (not certificate) authority.
Steve
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