I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
_http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html_).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-kitten-gssapi-store-cred-04.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn davies
Review Date: 23 May 2009
IETF LC End Date: 25 may 2009
IESG Telechat date: (if known) -
Summary: Ready for IESG
Minor issues/Observation: The whole sequence of GSS-API standards does
not define the type names (whether generic e.g., INTEGER or specific
e.g., CREDENTIAL HANDLE) used in the pseudo-code definitions of the APIs.
Nits/editorial comments: It is fairly obvious but it would be worth a
phrase indicating that the error codes, etc come from RFC 2743 and the C
type names come from RFC 2744.
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