The -05 version did not address my one technical comment
in Section 11:
AUID in the i= flag must always have an '@' sign according to the ABNF
in section 10. The example AUIDs given ("sub.example.com" and
"sub1.sub2.example.com") are missing this. Technically, I guess you
should say "the domain part of the AUID" instead of just "the AUID".
A couple of my editorial comments were also not addressed, mainly the
indentation of text in Section 9, 11, 13, and 14.
-Pete
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