I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) 
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see 
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). 

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
you may receive. 

Document: draft-ietf-sip-eku-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2009-06-02
IETF LC End Date: 2009-06-05
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 
(I apologize to have been late to send this review)
 - 1.2 page 3: X.680 [5],X.690 [6]. -> X.680 [5], X.690 [6].

 - 3 page 4:
   the application need not recognize -> needs???
   (BTW the spelling error, if it is an error, is in RFC 5280)

 - 9.1 page 7: IMHO (and shown by experience) numbering of references
  can lead to problems... I suggest to go to named references for next
  documents, in particular if they are longer.

Regards

francis.dup...@fdupont.fr

PS: I don't comment about the EKU idea, I've seen some PKI experts in
Acknowledgments so I expect you do the right thing.
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