I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve
these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
Document: draft-lha-gssapi-delegate-policy-04.txt
Reviewer: Sean Turner
Review Date: 2009-11-15
IETF LC End Date: 2009-12-08
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication
Comments: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.
Nits:
Spell out CIFS on first occurance. It's not in the RFC Editor's
abbreviations list
(http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt).
Sec 1: r/It would is desirable/It is desirable
Sec 2: r/If the deleg_policy_req_flag is set, then delegation should be
performed if recommended by central policy./If the deleg_policy_req_flag
is set, then delegation SHOULD be performed if recommended by central
policy.
Sec 5: r/the MUST/they MUST
spt
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