I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
_http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html_).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-capwap-802dot11-mib-05.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 12 December 2009
IETF LC End Date: 7 December 2009
IESG Telechat date: (if known)=
Summary: Ready for the IESG. There are a few editorial nits noted below
(the example IP addresses need to be fixed).
Major issues: -
Minor issues: -
Nits/editorial comments:
s3: WLAN is defined but no expansion of the acronym is given.
s5.1: Possibly define/expand PHY.
s5.2, next to last bullet: s/manage/management/
s5.3, last sentence; expand BSS acronym
s7.2: The paragraph
Also, the AC MUST have a mechanism that preserves the value of the
WLAN Profile Interfaces' ifIndexes in the ifTable at AC reboot.
is duplicated (last and last but 2).
s8: The IP addresses should be taken from the 'example' ranges (see
http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-iana-ipv4-examples-01). I don't know
that there is an example MAC address - the RFC Editor should know.
s9: Maybe WLAN and BSS should be expanded here in the descriptions as well.
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