On 14 Dec 2009, at 20:42, McCann Peter-A001034 wrote: > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer > for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html > <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html> ). > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-emergency-rsvp-14 > Reviewer: Pete McCann > Review Date: 2009-12-14 > IETF LC End Date: 2009-12-14 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > Summary: Ready > > Major issues: none > > Minor issues: none > > Nits/editorial comments: > > Appendix A.2: > RDM model > This is redundant (expands to "Russian Dolls Model model")
agreed. Francois > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
