I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-keyprov-symmetrickeyformat-07.txt Reviewer: Enrico Marocco Review Date: 2010-04-26 IETF LC End Date: 2010-04-26 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. Note: I'm not an expert in the area, hopefully more expert eyes have looked and are going to look at the ASN.1. Minor nits: Section 1. Introduction, second para: s/uses cases/use cases/ Section 3.3.4. Key Usage, "Verify" bullet: move the period after the parenthesis. Section 4.1. AES Key Encoding, first para, second sentence: OLD The first octet of sKey SHALL become the key byte in AES labeled index 0 in [FIPS197] SHALL be the first octet of sKey, and the other key bytes SHALL follow in index order. NEW The key byte in AES labeled index 0 in [FIPS197] SHALL be the first octet of sKey, and the other key bytes SHALL follow in index order. Section 4.2. Triple DES Key Encoding, second para: "msb" acronym is used without definition. It could be easily defined at the end of the previous sentence, where it is expanded. Section 5. Security Considerations, first para: s/[CMS]/[RFC5652]/
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