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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-igp-dataplane-conv-term-21.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2010-06-14 IETF LC End Date: 2010-06-14 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 3 and 6 page 27: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1 page 4: the DUT abbrev should be introduced at the first use - 2 page 4: IMHO you should expand the BMWG abbrev - 3.5.1 page 13: minimum and maximum number -> numbers? - 3.5.1 page 13: expand the ECMP abbrev? - 3.7.2 page 23: I don't like the packet loss meusurement unit, i.e., IMHO it should be (simply) packets - 3.7.7 page 25: e.g. -> e.g., Thanks [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
