Thank you, These seems like good suggestions. I will incorporate them.
/Stefan On 10-08-23 8:45 PM, "Vijay K. Gurbani" <v...@bell-labs.com> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-pkix-certimage-10 > Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani > Review Date: Aug-23-2010 > IETF LC End Date: Aug-24-2010 > IESG Telechat date: Unknown > > Summary: This draft is ready as a Proposed Standard. > Major issues: 0 > Minor issues: 0 > Nits/editorial comments: 1 > > Nits: > > 1) S6, second paragraph: > s/a CA with bad intentions/a CA with malicious intentions/ > s/or bad security procedures/or inadequate security procedures/ > s/bad performing CA/malicious CA/ > > Thanks, > > - vijay _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
