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Document: draft-ietf-fecframe-framework-10.txt
Forward Error Correction (FEC) Framework
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 19-Sept-2010
IESG Telechat date: 23 Sept 2010
Summary: This document appears to be nearly ready for publications as a
Proposed Standard
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
Section 5.6 says "Names must conform to the "name" production and values
encodings to the "value" production defined in Section 5.5"
However, section 5.5 says that valid element names and value ranges are
defined by the FEC scheme. There are no "production for these fields in
section 5.5.
The text in section 8 seems to imply that cellular devices experience
high loss rates. This is misleading, as radio level protocols generally
provide sufficient flow control and retransmission so as to bring the
link behavior to levels similar to that of other media. Please either
recheck the assumptions being made, or consider removing the reference
to cellular links.
Nits/editorial comments:
The definition of Application Data Unit should include an indication
that this is referred to as an ADU.
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