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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-turner-additional-new-asn-06 Reviewer: Kathleen Moriarty Review Date: 5 January 2011 IETF LC End Date: 1/18/11 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: The draft-turner-additional-new-asn-06 This is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Add a comma in the 5th line of the second paragraph of section 9. ASN.1 Module RFC 5652 Change From: for EnvelopedData but not for EncryptedData. The same separation is To: for EnvelopedData, but not for EncryptedData. The same separation is In the first line of paragraph 2, Section 11. Module Identifiers in ASN.1 Change From: When looking at an import statement, there are three portions: The To: When looking at an import statement, there are three portions: the In the second sentence of the same paragraph: Change From: Full implementations of ASN.1 do module matching using first the object identifier and if that is not present the textual name of the module. To: Full implementations of ASN.1 do module matching using first the object identifier, and if that is not present, then the textual name of the module. Last line of the same paragraph: Change from: need to match the module it is importing from). To: the need to match the module it is importing from). _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
