I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-isis-ieee-aq-03 Reviewer: Pete McCann Review Date: 2011-01-22 IETF LC End Date: 2011-01-18 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: none Minor issues: Section 4.4: In Figure 1, the bits are laid out in a bytewise-bigendian but bitwise-littlendian manner. Is this what was intended? Nits/editorial comments: Section 1: Missing Introduction text Section 2: Q-in-Q encapsulation) SHOULD BE: Q-in-Q encapsulation BridgeID 64 bit quantity = Bridge Priority:16 o SYSID:48 Does that o mean concatenation? This notation isn't clear. Section 5: in which cast SHOULD BE: in which case _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
