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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-intarea-server-logging-recommendations-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20110305 IETF LC End Date: 20110311 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 1 page 3: "... will diminish but this is a years long perhaps decades long process." I had a concern about the plural (years/decades) but I consulted someone with a better English than me who answered the whole construct was pretty bad... - 1 page 3: this <linebreak> documents. -> document - 2 page 4: e.g. -> e.g., - 2 page 4: preffered -> preferred (about this statement, should the document explain a localtime only is not enough (it is ambiguous during one hour per year, unfortunately it is trivial to know which one :-)?) Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
