Assuming you mean draft-doria-genart-experience-04, > - Section 4.3 links to I-D.rfc-editor-rfc2223bis - this draft expired in > 2008. New target needed.
http://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide.html. There's nothing else afaik. Regards Brian On 2011-07-21 23:41, Harald Alvestrand wrote: > Forgot to add gen-art to the To: line of the original mail - thought you > might like a copy. > > -------- Original Message -------- > Subject: Review of draft-doria-gen-art-08 > Date: Thu, 21 Jul 2011 12:21:05 +0200 > From: Harald Alvestrand <har...@alvestrand.no> > To: IETF discussion list <i...@ietf.org> > > > > I support the publication of this document. > > In general, the document is clearly written, explains the processes > followed for gen-Art review, and forms a valuable snapshot of the > procedures followed at this time. > It makes it very clear that the document does not, in any way, shape or > form, attempt to modify the rules for IETF work. > > One point that I can't see clearly stated (I may have missed it) is that > both the reviews and the names of the reviewers are public. This may > seem obvious now, but wasn't obvious when the process got started; I > think it is important to call this out. > > Nits: > > - Section 4.3 links to I-D.rfc-editor-rfc2223bis - this draft expired in > 2008. New target needed. > - In the same bulleted list, the last bullet should either be a > non-bullet or have "As well as" removed from its beginning. > - In section 4.4, a note should be made about groups of I-Ds. I think > the process is that when a document set is Last Called as a set, one > reviewer handles it if possible - but I am not sure about this. > - Section 6 claims that the quality of I-Ds has increased, but gives > only a single data point (2007). Is there a second datapoint that is > missing somehow? > > Thanks for doing this! > > Harald > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
