I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-05.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20110723 IETF LC End Date: 20110720 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Not Ready Major issues: 4.1 page 13 explains the use of ICMP in Traceroute: this is plainly wrong: ICMP can't be used in this way because no ICMP error can be triggered by an ICMP. BTW: - traceroute uses UDP probes just for this reason - I put this as a major issue because this must not be published in a document from the IETF Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr PS: I stopped the review at this point but I'll resume and send a full review ASAP (I like the document, OAM is something really useful and to try to organize it a great idea). _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art