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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-kivinen-ipsecme-secure-password-framework-01.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20110806 IETF LC End Date: 20110824 IESG Telechat date: known Summary: Ready (but see below) Major issues: there is one not about the document itself but about the goal of the document. Unfortunately only the IESG can solve the mess introduced by 3 different proposals to do the same thing... Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 1 page 3: I.e. -> I.e., - 1 page 4: adminstrator -> administrator - 1 page 4 (dubious wording): shared secret (\n) shared - 1 page 4: adminstrative -> administrative - 1 page 4 (twice): i.e. -> i.e., - 2 page 6 (4 times); preprosessing -> preprocessing - 2 page 6: preprossing -> preprocessing - 3 page 8: passwod -> password - 4 page 9: unnecessarely -> unnecessarily - Author's Address page 14: FI -> Finland Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
