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Document: draft-ietf-msec-gdoi-update-10
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 11 August 2011
IESG Telechat date: 11 August 2011
Summary: Ready (for the record). It appears that essentially all my
points from the Last Call review of -09 have been cleared up - thanks to
the authors. [Due to other things going on I missed the lastish minute
release of -10 and have only just seen it. In the meantime the draft
has been approved.]
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
s7, next to last para: s/is of the utmost importance/are of the utmost
importance/
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