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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-lisp-ms-11 Reviewer: Mary Barnes Review Date: 16 September 2011 IETF LC End Date: 29 September 2011 Summary: Ready. Nits: ----- If other changes are required, suggest that the following be fixed, otherwise, RFC editor will fix. - Section 4.2, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: "also be" -> "also" - Section 4.2, 5th paragraph, 2nd sentence: "can supported" -> "can be supported" - Section 4.3, next to last paragraph, last sentence: "as as" -> "as" - Section 4.4, 1st paragraph after list, 2nd sentence: "Map-Rqeuest" -> "Map-Request"
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