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Document: draft-ietf-mip4-nemov4-dynamic-05
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Oct-28-2011
IETF LC End Date: Nov-01-2011
IESG Telechat date: Nov-03-2011
Summary: This draft is ready as a Proposed Standard.
Major issues: 0
Minor issues: 1
Nits/editorial comments: 1
Minor issues:
- S3.1: "According to this specification ...", I am not sure what "this"
refers to? Does it refer to draft-ietf-mip4-nemov4-dynamic or does
it, instead, refer to rfc5177 (which is the topic of discussion in the
previous paragraph from where the above is quoted)?
Nits:
- S3.2, third paragraph:
s/a prefix it MUST/a prefix, it MUST/
Thanks,
- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
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Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurb...@alcatel-lucent.com
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