Hi, The suggested change looks ok to me.
Thanks! Regards, Christer Sent from Windows using TouchDown (www.nitrodesk.com) -----Original Message----- From: Peter Saint-Andre [psain...@cisco.com] To: Jari Arkko [jari.ar...@piuha.net] CC: Christer Holmberg [christer.holmb...@ericsson.com]; gen-art@ietf.org [gen-art@ietf.org]; draft-saintandre-urn-example....@tools.ietf.org [draft-saintandre-urn-example....@tools.ietf.org] Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart review of draft-saintandre-urn-example-04 On Apr 9, 2013, at 9:25 AM, Jari Arkko wrote: Thanks for your review, Christer. The document is up for discussion in this week's IESG telechat (on Thursday). Peter: Have you seen Christer's question about Section 2.6? Sorry, I had missed Christer's review. That text is an artifact of when the document was Informational, not BCP. I suggest: OLD As a result, implementers are counselled against using example URNs for any purposes other than documentation, private testing, and truly experimental contexts. NEW Therefore, it is NOT RECOMMENDED for implementers to use example URNs for any purposes other than documentation, private testing, and truly experimental contexts. Jari On Mar 25, 2013, at 12:48 PM, Christer Holmberg <christer.holmb...@ericsson.com<mailto:christer.holmb...@ericsson.com>> wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-saintandre-urn-example-04 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 25 March 2013 IETF LC End Date: 9 April 2013 IETF Telechat Date 11 April 2013 Summary: The draft is well written, with a very minor editorial comment, and is ready for publication. Major Issues: None Minor Issues: None Editorial nits: Section 2.6 contains the word “counseled”. While not wrong, is there a reason why more common IETF language can’t be used here? E.g. “recommended against”, or something? :) Best regards, Christer _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org<mailto:Gen-art@ietf.org> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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