Thanks Ben. We'll fix these nits in the next version. Mary.
On Tue, Oct 8, 2013 at 3:39 PM, Ben Campbell <b...@nostrum.com> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06 > Reviewer: Ben Campbell > Review Date: 2013-10-08 > IESG Telechat date: 2013-10-10 > > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. This > version addresses all the comments from my last call review of version 04. > I do have a couple of new (or I missed the first time) editorial comments > that might be worth addressing if there is a new version prior to approval. > > Major issues: > > None > > Minor issues: > > None > > Nits/editorial comments: > > -- General: > > idnits 2.12.18 reports some missing references--please check. > > -- Abstract and Intro > > Please expand UA and XCON on first mention (Both in Abstract and in > Section 1). > >
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