On 17/09/2013 17:15, Andrew Allen wrote:
Alexy
Thank you for the review.
My responses below prepended with [AA]
Andrew
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From: Alexey Melnikov [mailto:[email protected]]
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Subject: Gen-ART LC Review of draft-montemurro-gsma-imei-urn-16
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Document: draft-montemurro-gsma-imei-urn-16
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2013-08-08
IETF LC End Date: 2013-08-16
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational document (with
nits).
Major issues:
-- None
Minor issues:
In 3.1:
Rules for Lexical Equivalence:
Two GSMA IMEI URNs are equivalent if they have the same "imeival"
value, and the same gsma-specifier-params values in the same
sequential order, with the exception that the gsma-specifier-param
"vers=0" is to be ignored for the purposes of comparison. All of
these comparisons are to be case-insensitive.
Any identifier in GSMA namespaces can be compared using the normal
mechanisms for percent-encoded UTF-8 strings.
UTF-8 reference (RFC 3629) is missing here.
[AA] Will add the RFC 3629 reference
In -19 I see:
3. Namespace Registration Template
Rules for Lexical Equivalence:
Any identifier in 'gsma' NSS can be compared using the normal
mechanisms for percent-encoded UTF-8 strings (see RFC 3629 [10]) .
The reference should be [8], not [10]. This just demonstrates why
numeric references are a bad idea ;-).
A minor point:
10.2. Informative references
[8] Crocker, D. and P. Overell, "Augmented BNF for Syntax
Specifications: ABNF", STD 68, RFC 5234, January 2008.
This reference is Normative, because it is required to be understood in order
to interpret ABNF syntax.
[AA] As indicated in an earlier response I will make this normative
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