Dear Roni, Thank you for the review. Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : Roni Even [mailto:[email protected]] Envoyé : dimanche 26 janvier 2014 09:13 À : [email protected] Cc : [email protected]; [email protected] Objet : Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcp-description-option-03
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pcp-description-option-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2014-1-26 IETF LC End Date: 2014-2-4 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: 1. I am not sure what the use of the "description" option is. I can see how to create one but as for usage the only text I can see is "Querying the PCP server to get the description text of an existing mapping is out of scope." I think that the document should provide information about the purpose of this option. [Med] The main usage is for a user to associate a textual description with a mapping. This is captured by this text " This option can be used by a user (or an application) to indicate a description associated with a given mapping such as "FTP server", "My remote access to my CP router", "Camera", "Network attached storage serve", etc. " Nits/editorial comments: 1. The IANA section should provide enough information to fill the registry http://www.iana.org/assignments/pcp-parameters/pcp-parameters.xml#options [Med] Required information as per RFC6887 is provided in http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pcp-description-option-03#section-2.
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